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To Be NumbI gaze through the glassTo Be Numb by Invoking
To the last rays of light
And the long shadows cast
As dusk turns into night
Hands cling to the chain link
Still struggle to stand
I know what you may think
And I know what I am
A broken man
Still stealing these breaths
Because I can
I tried to hold on
If not but for your sake
But you walked away
Left my heart here to ache
Now it just
It's this feeling inside me
And my heart is its keep
It's a feeling that
Is known only to some
Not everyone knows
What it's like to be numb...
checkmatethere's a flower blooming in the early spring suncheckmate by Amarum
like the sentiment I used to feel for the beloved
whose lips never let a stray word of praise ring
in the suffocating air of my wandering presence
I know I am no match for her, no enlightenment needed
she prefers body caresses to those of literature nature
adored because of every virtue and the lack of mistakes
I watch from afar, not really interested in making a change
'the road to hell is paved with good intentions, dear' she'd say
with a dangerous glint in one of her many alluring smiles
it is not that she surprises me daily, she fails to continue in fact
I know already too much either to forget or to let the walls go down
one day she'd embrace me, twisting a thorn out of my side
just to bury it deeper into the tentative flesh, eyes made of glass
I hope I'd manage to get his reflection at last out of my head by then
the taste of honey promising lips never wasted on me though
Losing ItHave we lost the game?Losing It by NemoX7
A feeling that no one;
Not even I can really name.
Guessing by your temperate tone,
I assume you cannot say the same?
Have we lost the plot?
Was everything we sought;
Just a terrible thing that we forgot.
But this war of words we fought,
Has my veins all twisted in a knot.
Have we lost the way?
It's not like we were acting,
Out our love in a perfume play?
Are we winning or are we losing,
Just to pretend it never transpired the next day?
DaydreamsI don't expect you to stand out -Daydreams by Knight-Spectre
Or lead the march on a burning route.
But following your heart is a must -
When you find someone you can trust.
Trust will always knock on the door -
Even as you stare at the locks from the floor;
Just like hearts always remain broken -
But secretly hope their doors will be kicked open.
I used to be just like you.
So like you, I also waited around for a while -
Retaining all the memories that make me smile;
Until I daydream days of devastation -
Bringing me to a cruel realization:
I must "carry on alone" and be "strong" -
But it all just seems so wrong.
I've heard that in this world, trusting makes you "weak".
If that's true, then our future is looking bleak.
All I want is for the locks to come undone;
For one plus one to equal one.
But you'll keep searching far and wide;
Maybe you'll find someone at your side.
But I'm done; it'll never be -
Because only you brought out the best in me.
And if I can't have you, then I'